Score: 0

"Learn code for preloader"

submission: Worms Appocolypse

date: June 14, 2005

I thought this was too much like a stick video... no plot... slow... pointless... you couldn't even spell things right in you comments... no enjoyment dragged your score down...

Score: 10

"Normally i would have given this a lower score"

submission: All Your BLAM!

date: June 14, 2005

but the bad elements were only examples of the horrible evils that ravage newgrounds daily. I say with 100% certanty that i hate all clock and stick videos. They lack originality, let alone any sign of inteligence. Clear out the crap!!!

Nice reference to all your base!!!!

May teh pi be with you

Score: 10

"Muy Bueno!!!!"

submission: Ken's Date (Apple Switch)

date: June 14, 2005

Great job, enjoyed it a lot. Small file was nice for a change (didn't have to wait thirty freaking minutes for a good video) Liked the simpleness, it put the focus on your character. Animation done well. I don't know what you could have done to make it better...

Score: 1

"Boring and unoriginal"

submission: some stick fights

date: June 13, 2005

There are two many stick videos, none of which seem to have a plot. Blood violence sad loop. The one good thing is that you can do movement with your poorly drawn sticks. Learn how to draw and add some plot...

Score: 0

"Sorry, but i have a feeling"

submission: red vs blue teaser 2

date: June 8, 2005

this is just a rip off of an amazing series. (go to redvsblue com) you will see the real thing if you haven't already. Ripping off of other people is not cool. And besides you can't draw. You only used lots of gradients and guns. Not much talent apparent. No plot two teasers. Not worth my time

Score: 4

"OK tutorial"

submission: Lightsaber Tut. Pro 2.0

date: June 7, 2005

If you want use flash fine, but to really make a good light saber frame by frame editing in Adobe aftereffects or photoshop look much better, but for a flash video this is fine. Instead of using a real video at the end you should have used an animated character because it looked really cheezy especially your laser shot deflecting. I know, because i have done and seen better...

Score: 7

"meh..."

submission: Face Creator V.65

date: June 7, 2005

Decent artist... good song, not a whole lot you can do with it. I mean its cool and you can draw... and everything, but take your characters and animate them! I'm glad you know some code, but you could do something that would entertain me. I waited a good 6-8 minutes for this load and got ten seconds of slight amusement. keep working. I did see the first one, but i couldn't remember it well enough to see a difference. In three weeks i probably won't remember this one. MAKE PEOPLE REMEMBER!!!

Score: 3

"Sorry for your loss"

submission: Dedicated to my brother

date: June 7, 2005

I can't give you a high score, but that isn't what this video was for. Stick with whatever it is and stay afloat. There are plenty of tips i could give you, but this wasn't meant for flash, or for newgrounds.

Once again i am sorry for your loss

Gray clouds float over head
Filled with loss and dread
Wild seas toss and tear
Whipping about the air

But hope shines through the night
Hold on for the light
to vanquish fear
and give cause for your tear

...(composed in 3 minutes)
touching video

Score: 8

"Like you said... unfinished"

submission: KH: Cloud vs Sephiroth 2

date: June 3, 2005

As for your sound problems... you could try using a streaming sound because it binds the keyframes to the music. For each scene change, however, you would have to find the exact position where the last left off and it could get a bit annoying. I felt like you recycled to many things. You might want to consider upping the frame rate, allowing for a faster movie, therefore more action. At times it felt like it was dragging. I known its not easy and it gets boring as my sequel to my video that came out a year ago is still in the works. Just keep going, try something different, get others involved. You can't stare at the same pictures everyday and hope for inspiration...

Score: 8

"Pretty good... short"

submission: KH: Cloud vs Sephiroth

date: June 3, 2005

No problems with the animation. Over all was done well. Either you learned to use the trace bitmap function or you are really good with tablet. It works both ways. but i wasn't feeling the shortness was good