Score: 4

"... I would have like'd to given it a higher score"

submission: Who's On First?

date: May 25, 2005

I find these types of videos to be experimental in nature and they usually don't do anything for me. I have seen, read, and heard this routine. Don't steal the gas from your neighbor, buy your own. You need to brain storm for good ideas, not just jump onto the first idea. Also in your next vido you need to think about movement and all that other good stuff. Put more time into the thinking up and then a good video is sure to follow. You were able to manipulate emotions on the faces, which is something animators should be able to do, but isn't often found on newgrounds done well. I would also work on cleaning up your graphics a bit

Score: 3

"No real ending and just a rip off of other things"

submission: Screw B

date: May 24, 2005

It had no originality and while some of your effects were ok there was nothing to make any one watch it

Score: 9

"Almost the best Artwork I have seen on Newgrounds"

submission: Sumo the Bamboo man

date: May 16, 2005

Well done, though i felt the stick-like nature of the Bamboo man could have been done better. I really enjoyed the graphics though. Very well done. The sound was great and was pieced with the rest of the movie excellently. The only really contructively critical thing i have to say is that is seemed short for the load time. Other wise It is almost a ten

Score: 0

"Just Sad"

submission: KH2: Kupo!

date: May 16, 2005

I won't bother insulting it anymore, watching it insults it enough. Your sound goes faster than your key frames... and the text is readable afterwards... I am just ... depressed ... ... now ... ... ... ~

Score: 9

"Pi is good!!! oh you meant pie, but either way!!!!"

submission: Kingdumb hearts

date: May 9, 2005

Rather, good, better than i did anyway. Though Kingdom Hearts does have a really bad plot line at parts, it should be noted that parts of the game revive it a bit. Your sound and voices annoyed me a bit, just get a freind to join in and help. But i have had all those problems with my own videos. I enjoyed the graphics, but felt you had the potential to kick them up a notch even though it was propably all in the name of style. Keep on pumping them out... and if you get a chance check out my next vid, coincidentally also base on Kingdom Hearts. Its called Keyholder if you get the chance

Great job, enjoyed the video, but you really should have busted out the stops on your graphics, at the end at least (you had already made your point)

Score: 3

"umm...."

submission: kingdom hearts shorts

date: March 9, 2005

graphics are your only plus... your title doesn't fit because you said shorts... there is only one. The movie is 5 seconds long and stupid... the stick bubble is what really ruined it for me. I give you a thumbs up on what is probably a trace of a picture of sora... besides that i wouldn't recomend this anyone...

Score: 5

"Getting better"

submission: The Andrew Show (Ep 2)

date: January 13, 2005

I like it you have talent, but it still wasn't longer. Your art is fine and i am starting to see the random humor i like, but don't be in a rush to put things out. We will wait for the good stuff, it can only help you... longer looooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnngggggggggggeeeeeeeeeerrrrr

Score: 4

"meh..."

submission: The Andrew Show (Ep 1)

date: January 13, 2005

i wasn't really enthralled by it, a lack of comedy and length (wether puposefully or not)... Lets put it this way... if it had gone on the only thing that would have kept me is the graphics... besides this as you said plotless but if you do something more lengthy with a plot i am sure i would enjoy it... just not this

Score: 1

"wtf"

submission: Final Fantasy Fugitive

date: December 31, 2004

i wanted to wright something else but was lost for words so...
this sucked kill yourself

Score: 9

"Enjoyed, but slightly disapointed"

submission: Tribute to Kingdom Hearts

date: December 24, 2004

You did a great job animated and hooked me from the beginning however it was short... and had little point. There could have been some point to it. Keep working i like your style but as i said, lacking in depth