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Bien trabajo!
I hope to see more. Some character models could be better, but its clear that you have skill in flash.
Make the next one longer. It may take a while to get it on NGs but itl be worth the wait for us.
good use of music
may the pie be with you!
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"Would have been better if it was your idea"
Quit plagiarizing. Your not the original. I see you added the bealch i asked for, but seriously come up with something of your own.
USE YOUR TALENT FOR YOUR OWN! POSER!
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"Um if it was your idea, maybe more enjoyable"
its obvious you aren't the creator. Come up with something of your unknown. The video is watchable and not necessarily bad. You have talent put it towards your own work or don't do any more. Besides Bob didn't eve belch... ...
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good sound, and its obvious you can draw, but good flash vids tend to have a little more movement. The end product i'm sure will be good. But this looks like planning. If you want to do a flash then do a flash.
work at it, it seems you would rather do an actual animation and thats good, but don't waste our time with this
Author's Response:
It's not a waste of time, courtesely, in the real cartoon production people use making the videoboard to calculate the duration of the scenes on the music, then pass on the realization of the cartoon. The publishing of this was a kind of experiment to see what people really think, but maybe it was a mistake
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Yeah, it was good and probably better than good. There was a lot of walking. You could definately put more action in it. Just making it longer with more battles and more depth in the plot would improve it.
The graphics were great, if you want to improve them. Samus seems to change in size and the way she is drawn in different scenes.
The sound could be improved. Its great you are using the original, hooking your tv up to you computer might improve the quality. I have experience with a bad mic so i won't get into that too much. But seriously, drop the menu sounds if not completely then in volume they are way to loud.
Over all good, i hope your next is better. Keep at it.
Author's Response:
Gee thanks! well the sound is quite lacky because the filesize got really large! Actually all the sounds were made by me as well as the drawings, im quite proud with it!
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